Sledding is such an easy thing to do,
The only thing needed to go is you
Well, you might also need a sled that's thin,
And a cheerful, happy, smiling grin
The weather will have to be very cold,
Many will come, no matter young or old
The best place to go is a hill that's tall,
Make sure to be careful so you don't fall
Climbing to the top is the hardest part,
Kids wear good shoes, but only if they are smart
At the tip-top of the hill, looking down,
Some of the children might begin to frown
It might be very intimidating,
The feeling will be exhilarating
The wind will be rushing around their heads,
It's possible their cheeks will become red
Falling off the sled is always a risk,
If it happens, you might slip a back disk
That simply won't happen because you're safe,
If you don't watch out, you'll end in a cafe
The moral of this poem is simple,
When on a red sled, sit in the middle
This poem was a waste of your good time,
Simply because of my super lame rhymes
The weather will have to be very cold,
Many will come, no matter young or old
The best place to go is a hill that's tall,
Make sure to be careful so you don't fall
Climbing to the top is the hardest part,
Kids wear good shoes, but only if they are smart
At the tip-top of the hill, looking down,
Some of the children might begin to frown
It might be very intimidating,
The feeling will be exhilarating
The wind will be rushing around their heads,
It's possible their cheeks will become red
Falling off the sled is always a risk,
If it happens, you might slip a back disk
That simply won't happen because you're safe,
If you don't watch out, you'll end in a cafe
The moral of this poem is simple,
When on a red sled, sit in the middle
This poem was a waste of your good time,
Simply because of my super lame rhymes
It's only a bad poem if you admit it is. That said, it probably could have used a little bit of tender loving care.
ReplyDeleteAlthough you say it was a waste of time... it was not all a waste of time. Good job.
ReplyDeleteIt wasnt a waste of time because i laughed at the lines. I liked how it had a sense of humor and jolly in it. I also noticed that your last word should not be plural or you should change the last two lines to make a little more sense/flow better
ReplyDeleteI like the humor in the poem. It made a lot of fun to read.
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